List of Problems

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For review and correction:

  • the formatting for math equations is really obnoxious and not smooth at all in the text
  • figure 1.3 in Modeling Background in the Enabling and completion rules for actions sub-subsection only shows diagrams (a)-(c), but the paragraph talks about a fourth possible (d) scenario. You'll have to scroll down just a little.
  • there's something just grammatically wrong with the NEW bullet point and I'm not quite sure what the original intended comment is supposed to be/how to re-word this. The second sentence.
  • the last sentence of the Remote Shell Command bullet under External Tools is unable to reference whatever appendix section it's supposed to be (\ref{sec:remoteshell}), and I'm not sure if that's supposed to be "man" or or perhaps "main"?
  • in the last paragraph under Tree View, I feel like parent and child should be switched around, but I'm not sure.
  • reference to unknown section under the Import bullet point (\ref{sec:projman_sets}).
  • this is just a formatting concern: shouldn't Close be in the same typeset as Delete and all the others (in the description under the Close paragraph)?
  • second paragraph under Activities, first sentence - "predictes"? is that right?
  • not sure how to link to another figure on a different page directly - see end of second paragraph under Execution policy.
  • under Instantaneous transition, is the Arc Cardinality bullet supposed to be the exact same as it was for Timed transition?
  • under the Elements menu, the images are kind of bigger than what's in the pdf version. is there a way/should they be made into smaller icons? (the pdf manual also has each image placed in a box so each image has a thin black outline)
  • figure under Simulation has same caption as a previous figure

For review and correction:

  • the formatting for math equations is really obnoxious and not smooth at all in the text
  • figure 1.3 in Modeling Background in the Enabling and completion rules for actions sub-subsection only shows diagrams (a)-(c), but the paragraph talks about a fourth possible (d) scenario. You'll have to scroll down just a little.
  • there's something just grammatically wrong with the NEW bullet point and I'm not quite sure what the original intended comment is supposed to be/how to re-word this. The second sentence.
  • the last sentence of the Remote Shell Command bullet under External Tools is unable to reference whatever appendix section it's supposed to be (\ref{sec:remoteshell}), and I'm not sure if that's supposed to be "man" or or perhaps "main"?
  • in the last paragraph under Tree View, I feel like parent and child should be switched around, but I'm not sure.
  • reference to unknown section under the Import bullet point (\ref{sec:projman_sets}).
  • this is just a formatting concern: shouldn't Close be in the same typeset as Delete and all the others (in the description under the Close paragraph)?
  • second paragraph under Activities, first sentence - "predictes"? is that right?
  • not sure how to link to another figure on a different page directly - see end of second paragraph under Execution policy.
  • under Instantaneous transition, is the Arc Cardinality bullet supposed to be the exact same as it was for Timed transition?
  • under the Elements menu, the images are kind of bigger than what's in the pdf version. is there a way/should they be made into smaller icons? (the pdf manual also has each image placed in a box so each image has a thin black outline)
  • figure under Simulation has same caption as a previous figure